Nice work, Bobert. I've seen some false starts from you in the past and if I'm being honest was half expecting you to no-show. I was pleasantly surprised that not only did you post, but it was a solid opening effort. The story is pretty straightforward, so I won't go too into story ideas until you flesh out where you want to go for yourself. This was enough to do the job of reintroducing the character, saying what you needed to say quickly, and add a little humor to keep the reader going.

I have no idea how judging is done or what is valued these days, so this is what I'd say if we were doing this a few years ago; grammar check. This RP isn't too bad, especially considering some of your OOC posts (kidding, homie) but there is some punctuation and some spelling that might have been caught on another edit. It wasn't enough to take me out of the piece, but it's always good not to lose a few points where preventable.

Also, and this is entirely up to you, have you thought about doing first person? Most of your narrative paragraphs start "Chasm does this" and "Chasm thinks about that". If you were to start writing "I think" or having more reactions to your side characters it might spice up the language a little. Also, since you're not a huge trash talker, it lets you put more match relative content into the piece "within your own head" so to speak; it'll let you be more vulnerable, sell for your opponents a bit, but never have to say those things on camera. Again, totally up to you, I just figured I'd toss it out there. Shoot me a message here or on Facebook if you're not sure what I mean, or want to talk about it at all.

Good job. Glad to see you back.