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Feedback wanted! Mario's Roleplays
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#MemeQueen Luca Torchwick Offline
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#7
05-03-2017, 12:45 AM

(05-02-2017, 07:43 AM)DannyImperial Said:
me earlier Said:"Your roleplays seem a little rushed. Once you're done writing, I'd suggest taking some time away from the piece and then reviewing it. This will help you correct punctuation errors, you tend to not close your quotation marks. You also miss out on some capitalisation."

I can only reiterate. Your punctuation could really use some help, Microsoft Word.

Punctuation for bitches

I'm very proud of this joke for reasons I don't want to begin to understand.

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Messages In This Thread
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 04-20-2017, 10:39 PM
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 04-21-2017, 12:31 PM
Mario's Roleplays - by Imperial - 04-26-2017, 02:25 AM
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 04-30-2017, 12:31 AM
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 05-01-2017, 09:31 PM
Mario's Roleplays - by Imperial - 05-02-2017, 07:43 AM
re:Mario's Roleplays - by #MemeQueen Luca Torchwick - 05-03-2017, 12:45 AM
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 05-03-2017, 01:07 AM
re:Mario's Roleplays - by Imperial - 05-03-2017, 02:02 AM
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 05-03-2017, 02:10 AM
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 08-01-2017, 04:32 AM
Mario's Roleplays - by Doctor Louis D'Ville - 09-15-2017, 05:02 AM



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