Please Login or Register to get full access to the forums.

Lost Password? —
Current time: 07-27-2025, 08:47 AM (time should display as Pacific time zone; please contact Admin if it appears to be wrong)                                                                


X-treme Wrestling Federation » XWF OOC » Out Of Character (OOC) Board
Thread Rating:
  • 0 Vote(s) - 0 Average
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Feedback wanted! Mario's Roleplays
Author Message
Imperial Offline
The Unchained Prince


WWW
XWF FanBase:
(.Awaiting user update)
 (Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Thu Mar 16 2017
Posts: 225
154,025
Likes Given: 439
Likes Received: 367 in 153 posts
Hates Given: 10
Hates Received: 10 in 10 posts
Hates Given: 10
Hates Received: 10 in 10 posts
Reputation: 0
X-Bux: ✘50,000
#6
05-02-2017, 07:43 AM

me earlier Said:"Your roleplays seem a little rushed. Once you're done writing, I'd suggest taking some time away from the piece and then reviewing it. This will help you correct punctuation errors, you tend to not close your quotation marks. You also miss out on some capitalisation."

I can only reiterate. Your punctuation could really use some help, Microsoft Word.
The Unchained Prince

[Image: werwolves-eyes-for-Jason-Momoa.gif]
Hate Post Like Post


Messages In This Thread
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 04-20-2017, 10:39 PM
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 04-21-2017, 12:31 PM
Mario's Roleplays - by Imperial - 04-26-2017, 02:25 AM
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 04-30-2017, 12:31 AM
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 05-01-2017, 09:31 PM
Mario's Roleplays - by Imperial - 05-02-2017, 07:43 AM
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 05-03-2017, 01:07 AM
re:Mario's Roleplays - by Imperial - 05-03-2017, 02:02 AM
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 05-03-2017, 02:10 AM
Mario's Roleplays - by Super Mario - 08-01-2017, 04:32 AM
Mario's Roleplays - by Doctor Louis D'Ville - 09-15-2017, 05:02 AM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)