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Feedback wanted! Dr. Psycho-Roleplay Review
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04-18-2017, 06:20 PM

So, in my opinion, the story wasn't too bad. For the most part it was an enjoyable read.

The biggest thing that I saw, that I can truly offer you advice on, is punctuation and capitalization.

As I am no judge, I can't say for certain. But from what I have gathered, if it's a close call, punctuation and such become part of the score.

So you definitely want to make sure you're doing your best to use proper grammar, etc.

Otherwise, I enjoyed it. Big Grin


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Messages In This Thread
Dr. Psycho-Roleplay Review - by Dr.Psycho - 04-15-2017, 01:19 PM
re:Dr. Psycho-Roleplay Review - by Dr.Psycho - 04-18-2017, 05:35 PM
Dr. Psycho-Roleplay Review - by Cadryn Tiberius - 04-18-2017, 06:20 PM
Dr. Psycho-Roleplay Review - by Dr.Psycho - 04-18-2017, 06:58 PM
re:Dr. Psycho-Roleplay Review - by Imperial - 04-18-2017, 11:04 PM
Dr. Psycho-Roleplay Review - by Dr.Psycho - 07-10-2017, 06:46 AM



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