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Feedback wanted! RP Critique
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#4
04-15-2017, 07:37 AM

(04-15-2017, 06:49 AM)TRAX Said: I didn't mind him putting a spin on Trax's history, since he made a couple of slip ups which I was able to use against him so that worked in my favour.


Not quite sure how I feel about Drake abducting Trax's "mother" without asking for permission from me first usually things like that have to be discussed between the people RPing against each other, but I'll allow it, you'll see why when the show gets posted lol.


Drake in general your RPs are pretty solid, your trash is pretty decent as is your narration but it could definitely be strengthed by being more lengthy and elaborated in parts like Danny said. Maybe you felt like you couldn't go into too much detail with things because of the word limit but just for future reference.

Thanks man, as insightful as ever! Much respect!

I know, I should have asked and I apologize, but I wanted to spring a surprise twist on you. Also, the length issue is down to lack of experience (I've only been RP'ing for a total of about 2-3 months) so, yeah, again: Thanks and trust me, your feedback will be taken on board. Now, all I would like to say is:

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Messages In This Thread
RP Critique - by Drake - 04-14-2017, 01:47 PM
RP Critique - by Imperial - 04-15-2017, 06:06 AM
RP Critique - by Mr Killjoy - 04-15-2017, 06:49 AM
re:RP Critique - by Drake - 04-15-2017, 07:37 AM
re:RP Critique - by "Dark Warrior" Micheal Graves - 04-15-2017, 07:42 AM



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