Heyyo! I think Trax had a lot in his roleplay and you could've played with what he gave you more. You gave him one paragraph and then focused a lot on his history, but the nice thing about following another roleplay is being able to dissect it and point out his weaknesses.

Also, as you delved into his history, you didn't seem to comment on it much. You were reading off things, but in classic essay style you didn't broach into the Point -> Elaborate -> Explain style, which I think will be really good for your future work.

I'm going to take a swing and ask if you checked with Trax before slipping into your role in his history. As a handler, I'm not sure if he might be comfortable with you jumping in if you hadn't asked. If you did however, then that's great and you can use that to your advantage in the future.