Well, I really liked that you were like, "Words from a Tormented Mind", referencing that these are the words of a dude going through the crazy stuff that you see in the story portion. I mean, in a way that's all you need.

I might kind of retract the idea that it was a flaw, cause it ain't like Scotty is gonna necessarily be like, "Okay, promo time. First, I want to tell you about what has been going on in my personal life."

So, I mean, when the promo rolls around and he's talking trash, I guess really, you did it just right. He's a tormented mind, cutting this promo. But, I mean, its not Dr. Phil so its not like he's necessarily going to go and divulge everything that happened to him in the rest of the day.

Also, I should mention...the continuity between your RP's and the match he had...the fact that Charlotte is experiencing aftermath from a match and its lingering with him...AWESOME. Stuff like this makes the XWF seem alive and real. I love it.

Really, the main thing is that your RP's were really, really good. I just figured to give a suggestion about the trash-talk, to have some productive purpose to my post, but really, I think you were fine. But maybe continue, IMO, the whole thing of the segue title of the trash-talk portion relating to the story. I think its fun.