My gut tells me that this wasn't as strong as my first, which is good, because now there might be some room for some constructive criticism, areas to try and improve for, for my next one.

Still, that's just me being critical. What did YOU, the XWF faithful think of this one?

I'm just going to keep asking until I really get a handle on this character.

Thanks!

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=26204