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Feedback - if you would be so kind.
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Chris Chaos Offline
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(heel alignment but liked by many; has earned respect despite breaking the rules often)


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01-14-2017, 03:26 AM

I second that ^ Good flow, patience and style. Living here in Tampa I have been by Jeter's place before and you did a good job of describing it. Plus, you knew it was on Davis Island. Nice research! Good overall flow and it kept my attention the entire time. A lot of new characters are written in a confusing style but not yours. Bravo
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Feedback - if you would be so kind. - by Chris Chaos - 01-14-2017, 03:26 AM



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