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Feedback wanted! What do you like and dislike about my RPS?
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"Dark Warrior" Micheal Graves
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12-02-2016, 04:15 PM

(12-02-2016, 03:00 PM)Thomas Nixon Said: Take this with a grain of salt because I'm new here, but as much as I like out there stories and arcs, I like them to be in some way thematically related to the match. So when I see an RP that's mostly random stuff going on and then a little bit of smack talk thrown at the end for relevance, I'm usually a little disappointed. I like when the story/arc is in some symbolic or thematic way related to the upcoming match. This is a bigger criticism to backstory dumps. Backstory is usually interesting, but I think it needs to be tied together into the XWF somehow and I can't stand when it isn't.

I personally haven't read much of your stuff, so I can't speak to that. I just wanted to throw out that tip though because you sound like you're planning on doing a lot of character stuff in the future.

Noted. That is part of what I thought was wrong with RP 4. It tied into the previous RPs sure, but it was a stand alone story that hardly mentioned Mikes upcoming match. Of course it is leading into something, but it was more of a bridge between RPS than anything else.
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What do you like and dislike about my RPS? - by R A D I C A L - 12-02-2016, 10:44 AM
re:What do you like and dislike about my RPS? - by R A D I C A L - 12-02-2016, 07:51 PM
re:What do you like and dislike about my RPS? - by "Dark Warrior" Micheal Graves - 12-02-2016, 04:15 PM



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