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Feedback wanted! What do you like and dislike about my RPS?
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"Dark Warrior" Micheal Graves
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12-02-2016, 02:23 PM

This stint marks the first time that I have ever attempted to keep my RPS tied together with a story. I used to write 90% trash talk with maybe a small story connected sometimes. I'm trying to avoid having random camera crews show up, or just filming promos against my opponent because even when I used to rely heavily on that style, I never cared for it.

It always seemed odd that we would have camera crews show up to film spots that were never actually included on the shows, and I like the idea that the wrestler is always in character even in his outside life because the character isn't necessarily a character.

The 3rd RP that I wrote has probably been my personal favorite so far. Using a first person inner monologue seemed to work well, and I could have Graves doing something mundane like working out, but address the story with his self doubt and inner demons all at the same time as reveling his thoughts on his opponent.

However I went into the 4th RP in much the same manner, and was not nearly as happy with the final result. It's definitely a work in progress for me, but I'm enjoying the challenge of changing my style.

I've managed to read a few RPS of Dolly and Duke so far, and loved their style of writing. Duke as evidenced by my vote for RP of the month was my favorite, but that's just because I was really invested in the story it was telling. I haven't read a Doc RP yet m, but it is definitely on my to do list.
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What do you like and dislike about my RPS? - by R A D I C A L - 12-02-2016, 10:44 AM
re:What do you like and dislike about my RPS? - by R A D I C A L - 12-02-2016, 07:51 PM
What do you like and dislike about my RPS? - by "Dark Warrior" Micheal Graves - 12-02-2016, 02:23 PM



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