First off, this last week has been a little crazy for me. After not writing or role playing at all for the last 10 years and just jumping back on the saddle I find myself doubting the quality of everything that I type while also experimenting with different styles. My main goal is obviously to tell the story of Micheal Graves, but to also keep the reader interested. Am I accomplishing that goal?

Also I do realize that I may not be focusing enough on my match, but since my opponent has yet to show I decided to use the time to get some character development in. I write Micheal in the style that his "real life" and wrestling life are one and the same. So it made sense to me to explore some of the internal things that he is dealing with.

So with that said, what do you like and dislike? What should I work on to make my RPS more interesting for you to read?

Any tips will be appreciated.