It is, yeah it is hard because i wrote so many differenr styles of writing i sometimes forget which rules and stuff to follow. I read and reread, i caught a lot of it but missed a few, i was a little worried the pictures were too many but for this particular one i felt it was okay. But can improve more for sure. Still tossing ideas around for my new one. Im trying to use many concepts and intertwine a lot more, then got back and integrate pieces of writing together and through so it works, like the idea of reno now. Then him in the xwf old west, but meanwhile hes imagining it as a saloon fight. Idk i maybe going with too many.