I liked it, honestly, I think you write Paul Heyman's character in real life you do such a good job with his promo's representing your character Dolly Waters, I feel like I am watching him in WWE when he first showed up in WWE. You have a lot of talent no denying that you keep it enjoyable, and never overboard with useless information. I personally can never write a real life person character, I'm terrible at it, so my hat is off to you for that. Hope any of the feedback was useful.