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10-04-2016, 09:53 PM

It was a unique role play I liked it, peppering RPs with quotes is usually looked down upon but you did it in a way that works. A bit of storytelling/character development doesn't hurt you, even if its just a bit at the start telling us the reader a bit about your character what their motives are etc before you go into the whole promo dissecting thing.
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Promo Sins feedback - by Promo Sins - 10-04-2016, 08:18 AM
Promo Sins feedback - by Dolly Waters - 10-04-2016, 08:35 AM
Promo Sins feedback - by Makaveli - 10-04-2016, 03:33 PM
Promo Sins feedback - by Mr Killjoy - 10-04-2016, 09:53 PM
Promo Sins feedback - by Promo Sins - 10-04-2016, 11:28 PM
Promo Sins feedback - by The Monster of Htaed - 10-08-2016, 06:10 AM



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