Ravenwood Im sorry I made it a personal attack on your story and I'm sorry that I just didn't bite my tongue. Do what you do, I'm not interested in reading anymore of yours stuff. If yall like the dark wicked shit by all means go Dahmer on it, but I didn't think someones opinion about what you wrote would cut that deep to the bone of someone who thought a baby sacrifice in a story. And I never said you killed the kid in the cage.

I said you killed a baby (in story) to ask a a guerilla, if he was going to hurt the kid that fell in. The guerilla said no. You never said you hadidn't control of the guerilla. The guerilla if he was willing to protect a kid, yet sees a dead baby..you don't think the guerilla would attack you? He died protecting a kid..it didn't make sense stroyline wise. If there's more too it to fill in the loop holes then great. I was at the time not aware of the depth of which this site allows creative Control over taking lives and to me...taking a babies life. Seemed to be a cop out and a quick way to try to get heat and to me the story left more questions that should've been answered during the same promo, but maybe you have an overarching story to tie it all together. I really have no clue. Your prolly an ok guy, girl, whatever your are.