Your lack or originality was the only thing offending and the off putting part was it made no sense and your whole promo turned to shit by the end. You killed a baby to raise a monkey to ask if was going to kill the kid that fell in the cage. It said no, your character just killed a kid that he would've protected...thus making it abundantly and defeated the purpose of your last dying days of WCW esque days of trying to shock the crowd instead of giving something with substance. Not bad for a Edgar Allen Poe wannabe. Just lame been done way to many times..

A witch and sacrafices...oh and a baby....oh for harambe...oh harambe was going to be good to kid. Yet you killed one and yet no where did it say that you had control of said gorilla, so gorilla would've wanted more revenge for a baby being killed and if Harambe was that careful to protect the kids he'd prolly gladly gave his life for the kids.

Aka you killed a baby to ask a gorilla what he'd done with the child. Hed a protected it. He likes kids you kill kids...dosnt that not ring outloud loop holes and just plaim stupid as fuck.