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Feedback wanted! 7/6 Warfare Feedback
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07-07-2016, 03:11 PM

I thought your segment was good. Couldn't really think of any commentary to add to it, so I just out in the two or three sentences.

I think the work you are doing to build a rivalry with Dillinger leading u the LoF is what we need to see more of. If there isn't a story there, make one. That's kind of what's been going on with the schmozzes. Vinnie and Scully never had any sort of beef or any reason to have one, but Scully won the title shot. So, I've tried to create a story of Scully and the Union looking like megaheels who are capable of winning.

Oh, and the overarching theme was closer to "everyone hates Girard."

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Messages In This Thread
7/6 Warfare Feedback - by Vincent Lane - 07-07-2016, 02:42 PM
re:7/6 Warfare Feedback - by Prof. Bobby Bourbon - 07-07-2016, 03:06 PM
7/6 Warfare Feedback - by Roxy Cotton - 07-07-2016, 03:11 PM
re:7/6 Warfare Feedback - by Thomas Girard - 07-07-2016, 03:14 PM
re:7/6 Warfare Feedback - by Prof. Bobby Bourbon - 07-07-2016, 03:20 PM
re:7/6 Warfare Feedback - by Scully - 07-08-2016, 03:32 AM
re:7/6 Warfare Feedback - by Shade - 07-08-2016, 06:26 AM
7/6 Warfare Feedback - by Peter Fn Gilmour - 07-08-2016, 10:13 AM



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