But I was waiting for Drake to give feedback...


Fine... Drezdin, one thing that strikes out to me is you use the same font color for everything, switch it up, have a different font color for descriptive text and another one for talking text, and give different people different colors for talk text to help differentiate.


Also your chosen font size for your RPs is a little TOO big in my opinion, scale it down a bit. Your trash talk and descriptive narrative is fine but very short, RPs should ideally be around 2-3k. Expand on things, go into more detail when setting scenes, trash talk your opponent more, or develop your character more and give more insight into them (theres numerous ways you can do that e.g simply have your character talk about their motives, their experiences, their general life to give the reader more insight on your character and their personality and background).

Lastly, before you post an RP, proof read it for spelling and grammar mistakes, and after you've posted it, proof read again just in case.

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