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Feedback wanted! obvious help needed
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Mia Dim Offline
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#3
01-21-2016, 06:49 AM

I would try to make the promo cutting parts sound less generic. A lot of it reminded me of a script that they would throw at Randy Orton to memorize for the camera.

Send in a crazy segment or attack someone on the shows, that way you show that your character has certain goals and it gives you something other than your opponents to talk about. I had Dim attacking people in weird/racist/homophobic ways for several weeks just so I could write about some shit besides my match.

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obvious help needed - by BrianLance - 01-21-2016, 04:02 AM
obvious help needed - by Morbid Angel - 01-21-2016, 05:45 AM
obvious help needed - by Mia Dim - 01-21-2016, 06:49 AM
re:obvious help needed - by BrianLance - 01-21-2016, 07:18 AM



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