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Feedback wanted! Debut rp?
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#1
06-09-2015, 08:49 PM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=20288

What do you think? Is it good, or no?
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#2
06-10-2015, 05:52 AM

I liked it, good character introduction and development RP which is always kinda essential in a debut RP imo.


Only bad thing is I found the text in orange hard on the eyes and difficult to read, it may be my poor sight though, I'll see if another user can clarify which one it is lol.
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#3
06-10-2015, 06:20 AM

Yeah it was a little tough to read, but I think it's because of the font choice more than the color.
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#4
06-10-2015, 06:42 AM

Is this better?

Or this?
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#5
06-10-2015, 06:47 AM

Probably the second. The Impact font is just hard to see, imo.
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#6
06-10-2015, 06:50 AM

Then I'll try a new font for the second RP.
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#7
06-10-2015, 06:54 AM

Yeah I'm with with Vinnie the first text may be more vibrant or whatever word you wanna use but the second is significantly more easier to read.However I think its a mix of the color and font to be honest because I find that grey bolded text easier to read than the orange bolded text.
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#8
06-10-2015, 08:22 AM

Is this good?
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#9
06-10-2015, 08:36 AM

Yeah thats great.
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#10
06-12-2015, 07:38 AM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=20318

What about this RP, is it good?
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