What do you think of my Ezekiel character?

Is he a big step up or down from Liz?

What do you like about him?

What do you dislike?

What can I improve on?

I'm open for any feedback.

1: Very big step up from Liz, personally I think you found the right character. Nothing wrong with Liz but E.C.W. the fifth is awesome

2: The casual drug use here and there haha. Seriously though, he is just overall great. I can't really say one thing or the other that I like. Just a great character overall...

3: Nothing

4: Improve, I would have to go back and re-read but from what I already know, just go into more detail on some stuff. Just little things, nothing serious

I like him a lot actually.

Huge step up from Liz. To be honest I was surprised they were handled by the same person. That's not to say Liz sucks or anything but sometimes the right combination of things happen and it just clicks.

Thanks you two beautiful she men.

Zeke's awesome. That is all.

After all he's Charlottes partner and they are kicking ass.

(01-02-2014, 04:49 PM)Ezekiel Carter-Williams V Said: Thanks you two beautiful she men.

That's it, you aren't invited to my office. Snort your meth yourself. Send the Family Guy DVD's though.

I'm sending reruns of Jersey Shore

(01-02-2014, 05:16 PM)Ezekiel Carter-Williams V Said: I'm sending reruns of Jersey Shore

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