I'm not really asking for feedback on any specific rp, but was curious if anyone thinks my character is getting stale or if it's still interesting and intriguing. I'm enjoying the rp'ng still using Eli, but just curious what the readers think is all.

I don't know much of the character but...he is interesting...in a creepy, Jim Jones kinda way...I mean it all with the best intentions but that's just how he comes off.

Still a huge fan of the character, dude. You've managed to do something that's quite heard to do; keep a character with such a giant sign that says 'Free Trash Talk Material Here' and make it so almost 95% of what people say about him really make them look foolish rather than you.

For that, I commend thee.

@Minx - Thanks. I don't see what you said as anything but good. I appreciate it.

@Luca - Thank you, sir. At times it gets difficult because everyone says similar things, and I tend to do a few things that can become old hat which is the challenge for me. I appreciate your kind words.

I guess it all depends on what scale you would prefer to be critiqued on. Reading over your stuff I really can't find anything wrong story-wise or trash talk-wise. You have one of the most interesting characters, one which you would think is easy to trash talk down to, but you play the character so well that people's trash talk kinda just bounces off of you. You're probably the worst character to try to pick a fight with because you really don't give your opponents much to argue against since you stick to your message and they often times just hit a brick wall.

You do seem to have stalled a little bit as far as your story goes and you're kind of repeating certain things... but honestly, I think a bunch of us have that problem when we've been RPing as the same character for a while. We reach a point where we repeat stuff and aren't really introducing anything brand new and hot. We all (that includes me) can afford to freshen up our routines from time to time. You're getting to that point, but I don't think it's affecting your overall performance that much. You're work is still up there at the top. You just might run into problems with these fresh characters like Diaz and Angelus if you don't pick up speed a little bit.

(08-28-2013, 05:23 PM)Juan Madison Said: You're work is still up there at the top.

Your*

Just saying. Lol

Thanks for the advice and compliments.

I find myself being really entertained when I read your RPs. Like Madison said though we all have a tendency to repeat ourselves and what not. I really enjoy the character and reading your RPs though. I would like to work with you (against you) at some point because I was coming up with all sorts of ideas in my RPs that I decided not to use for that reason. I feel drawn to the character, which is why I said more about you in my RPs than my actual opponents. I try to read everybody's but I felt almost compelled to read yours. Really good stuff, man.