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KnightMask Offline
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#1
05-14-2013, 08:13 PM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=2761

Was really struggling with writers block. Also, with work scheduling and what not. Stories were in my head, but for some reason, I couldn't find the means to express them.

So, I tried a different route from normal and went first-person. Lemme know how it was.
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Elisha Offline
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#2
05-17-2013, 05:18 PM

I, for one, really enjoyed this one.
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Steve "KingSlayer" Davids Offline
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#3
05-18-2013, 03:02 PM

I really enjoyed this.... I enjoy reading and writing in first person as I think it makes it more personal. good work.
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