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Feedback wanted! obvious help needed
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BrianLance Offline
Knows No Pain



XWF FanBase:
Hardcore, psycho fans

(cheered for breaking rules and bones; excessively violent; creative with weapons)


#1
01-21-2016, 04:02 AM

in light of my totally unacceptable attempt at a come back is failing horribly. I would like to hear what it will take to get right. I am in no way blaming anyone other then myself for this failure. I know my style is extremely outdated and that don't help matters. Please send me any ideas that might help. Thanks and I have to say sorry for not putting in the work I'm used to doing and known for. This match should have been so much better but I feel my lacking RPS drugged it down into what seemed like a meat match to me. please dont let this seem like a bitch session thing just not happy with my effort and would like to know how to pick it up and get right again.


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Morbid Angel Offline
Баба Яга



XWF FanBase:
Very random

(heel alignment but liked by many; has earned respect despite breaking the rules often)


#2
01-21-2016, 05:45 AM

You have a PM

болезненное ангел!
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Mia Dim Offline
TPOI



XWF FanBase:
Kids, women, some teens

(fighting the odds; helps others; disliked by adult males)


#3
01-21-2016, 06:49 AM

I would try to make the promo cutting parts sound less generic. A lot of it reminded me of a script that they would throw at Randy Orton to memorize for the camera.

Send in a crazy segment or attack someone on the shows, that way you show that your character has certain goals and it gives you something other than your opponents to talk about. I had Dim attacking people in weird/racist/homophobic ways for several weeks just so I could write about some shit besides my match.

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Knows No Pain



XWF FanBase:
Hardcore, psycho fans

(cheered for breaking rules and bones; excessively violent; creative with weapons)


#4
01-21-2016, 07:18 AM

Thanks guys think i might got a grip on where i need to improve and what needs to be done. Thanks again


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