Eddie Sheehan
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06-28-2014, 12:39 PM
I've been out of the game for a long time. This is the first return to fiction I've made in over two years. Please let me know what you guys think about it. My wife is no fucking help.
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Eddie Sheehan
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP
XWF FanBase:
Mixed reactions
(cheered heavily at home; hated by some; dips between clean/dirty)
(Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Thu Jun 19 2014
Posts: 11
4,705
Likes Given: 0
Likes Received: 3 in 3 posts
Hates Given: 0
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Eddie Sheehan
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP
XWF FanBase:
Mixed reactions
(cheered heavily at home; hated by some; dips between clean/dirty)
(Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Thu Jun 19 2014
Posts: 11
4,705
Likes Given: 0
Likes Received: 3 in 3 posts
Hates Given: 0
Hates Received: 0 in 0 posts
Hates Given: 0
Hates Received: 0 in 0 posts
Reputation:
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X-Bux: ✘50,000
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07-01-2014, 07:45 AM
That was kind of my intention because it was a dream, but I probably should've made it clearer that he was dreaming, through imagery or something. Thanks a lot for the feedback, man. I really appreciate it.
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