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Lazarus Offline
[Expunges Internally]


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#1
02-16-2014, 05:13 PM

Click Here.

If it isn't too much to ask, I'm curious how this RP came off and what I can do to improve moving forward.
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Kristy Jackson Offline
The Joan Of Charisma


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#2
02-16-2014, 05:29 PM

Well I liked the story part. I also like how you use a chess term in your trash talk. Hope my feedback is worth something. hahha Smile

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THE FUCKED UP RESULT OF A COLLISION BETWEEN FIRE AND ICE, STEP COUSIN TO A WARM PUDDLE...
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TrevorLord Offline
The Renaissance Man


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#3
02-16-2014, 05:32 PM

Well I already gave it a like because I thought it was a really awesome RP. I love your style. You know how to talk shit and you write well, too. Personally I say just keep it up.
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