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Shove It Review
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#1
01-28-2014, 01:59 PM

So, we have quite a few threads with people saying what they thought but I figure I'd limit it here. What were your thoughts on the Shove It show, and more specifically, the entire end?

Were you shocked at the end? What went through your mind as you saw everything play out?

I'm sure Admin and Archie would also love to hear it.

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#2
01-28-2014, 02:10 PM

I thought the ending was great. As far as shocked go, I wouldn't go that far, I kinda expected The Congregation to be involved, just not in that vicinity.

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#3
01-28-2014, 02:20 PM

For me it was the biggest story line twist since I joined, I won't review my own show though... obviously.

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#4
01-28-2014, 03:36 PM

I liked it, it had a lot of interesting twists and developments.

I think I would have preferred to see it span over several shows instead of packed into one segment though. The Black Circle/Etched stuff could have been done on a separate/earlier show. Then the following week have Eli announce Feder's return and induction to the Congro. The next week have Admin win the match with the help of Congro. Then finally have the next show end with Eli dropping Admin. Would have made for a great month-long storyline in my opinion.

But this way works too. Can't wait to see where this goes.
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01-28-2014, 03:38 PM

I think having it all jammed into one action packed show made it more dramatic and less predictable though ^

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#6
01-28-2014, 03:49 PM

I donno, if you go week-by-week with those four developments, they still remain unpredictable.

It doesn't really matter, but I think the story could have been spread out over the course of 2-4 weeks.

1. Show 1 ends with Shane turning on TBC to join ETCHED - Never would have seen that coming. Shock #1

2. With TBC crippled, ETCHED turns their attention to Congro. Show 2 ends with Sid Feder returning to save Congro from a beatdown. Sid is a big name, I thought he was gone, definitely wouldn't have guessed him joining Congragtion. Shock #2

3. Show 3's main event is Congro w/ Admin vs. ETCHED w/ Shane. Seeking revenge, TBC runs in to cost ETCHED the battle. With ETCHED all tangled up with TBC, Congro chops Shane. Shock #3

4. Have some coronation ceremony for Admin to end show 4. End the show with Eli turning on Admin and seizing control over the XWF while TBC and ETCHED look on helplessly. Shock #4


The big final segment worked good though.
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01-28-2014, 04:17 PM

(01-28-2014, 03:36 PM)John Madison Said: I think I would have preferred to see it span over several shows instead of packed into one segment though. The Black Circle/Etched stuff could have been done on a separate/earlier show. Then the following week have Eli announce Feder's return and induction to the Congro. The next week have Admin win the match with the help of Congro. Then finally have the next show end with Eli dropping Admin. Would have made for a great month-long storyline in my opinion.

Was my plan. But I was brought in late. The whole storyline actually didn't come together until late. I was literally blind to the ETCHED bit. I did all the segments previous to the Main Event match itself.

It was just so crammed with the Admin Vs Shane story- that it had to be all done on the same show. I wasn't able to do what I wanted to build to an Infamous vs TBC. Sewaside wasn't sure which side would benefit him more. Hence his newest work(RP#2 for Warfare). Both sides gone, benefits him most. As will it benefit me. It just places a damper on things since it twists my character towards the direction I avoided for various obvious reasons.

But Eli's the man- in character. So I guess it's the Road I must travel.

As for my thoughts. Not shocked. Not surprised. Determined. It's going to be a great February nevertheless. Just stretches things away from my plan. Loads of replanning has to be done. Hence my slow posting of RPs or anything storyline-wise.

Let's get it folks!
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#8
01-28-2014, 04:59 PM

I was like what the FUCK! it was good though...could have used a little more fork lol j/k

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01-28-2014, 06:36 PM

the ending was very well done and im interested to seeing what eli and crew will do now..

but i was glad I beat up theo Tongue

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