Anyone have any thoughts on the character or the story I'm telling? My biggest concern is that I'm coming across as dull or something and if I am, please tell me. Thanks in advance!
Its far from the worst I've read. I think honestly you need something with some action....excitement. i know that's what i say to everyone but it is truth. if it isn't too fast paced or funny people will lose interest. don't be discouraged by my words. I am just being honest with you. well written and I think with the right ideas in your rp you could be unstoppable here.
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