I would love to get some feedback on a few of my past pieces, to see if I should continue with this idea.

Viking Part One

Viking Part Two

Ok, about the first one-- you SERIOUSLY are a fantastic writer. As I said, you remind me of Brittany... my old friend from WWG. And I love the idea of going back in time... and you capture the feeling of that era so well. Annnd... Hannah was actually, or maybe still is, I don't know as she no longer speaks to me... but she at least WAS working on a story called "Luna, Child of the Moon", so that part instantly reminded me of her... Also, I was wondering, do you like video games? I didn't know exactly what the songs in the videos were from at first, but I realized that, I think at least, they're from video game soundtracks. Though, I could be completely mistaken. >.< But I especially like the song in the second roleplay... I love both pieces. You should DEFINITELY continue, I'd be interested in where it goes...

... btw. I'm about to post a link to something I posted in Character Development. I'm going to post that, as well as a link to something else I wrote... if you could check them out and let me know what you think, I'd greatly appreciate it. Thank you.

BTW-- I also LOVED your "Finding the Truth" roleplay. You're very good with details, just like Brit. I look forward to reading more from you. ^.^

I liked them both. I'm a bit biased when it comes to Vikings though.

Only thing I'd recommend is the use of Amon Amarth.

You already know I love them.

Now I can address everyone and so sorry it's taken me so long. I blame this stupid bronchitis.

rayne - not that you will read this, but I love the Viking era, it's part of my family history. As for the songs, they are from the History channel show "Vikings".

eli - perhaps we will see more in the future. I just need to do a bit more research. I might use some more in our match.

Jessie - I love that song...I'm actually going to use it.. so thank you for the suggestion.

Micah - You always love my rps!

Lmao. That's all I need to do. Just go why ask? You know someone loves it!

... ok... I came to this forum... and before even looking at my own feedback thread, I wanted to look at yours.

I'm really glad you think you know me. Because I hardly ever do.

And I'll be honest. I still want to be friends with you. But that'll obviously never happen.

BTW-- I think it's amazing they're part of your lineage.

But as you said about me... you probably don't care what I think.

But I do hope you continue.

As if my opinion matters.



After enjoying our first few conversations, and then enjoying your writing so much...

Fuck it. I should have known this would happen. It always fucking does.

Ok... after re-reading my "Mission Statement" post... I'm sorry for saying what I did in the previous comment. I shouldn't have let my emotions get the best of me... I'm sorry. It's just that, when you said "you're not going to read this", that seriously upset me... but as I said in the 'Mission Statement'... I'm not going to let things like that get to me.

So I apologize.