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This Might Sound Really Weird, but Can a Table Get Some Feedback?
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#1
06-30-2013, 09:47 PM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=4220

So yeah, anyone want to give their opinions on this? I can honestly say I've never written anything like this before, so I'm rather inexperienced in the complexities of writing as a suddenly animate inanimate object...

Any thoughts would be greatly appreciated!
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06-30-2013, 09:50 PM

you are a genius!
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07-01-2013, 10:26 AM

Genius? That wasn't what I was expecting. I was thinking it'd be more along the lines of "Dude, what the fuck?" but damn! That's a huge compliment! Thank you!
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