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feedback of my 1st promo
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#1
04-07-2013, 01:13 PM

The Journey of the Nerd begin

Well i have just finished my first promo with Gamegenie and i would like to hears the though of anyone.

If you all enjoy it or if you think i need to improve something ^^.

The honesty of someone, is also welcome =).
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#2
04-08-2013, 09:00 AM

Just read this one as well, I will admit it was very entertaining, I loved the banter between the narrator I thought it was very creative.

All roleplays need improvement because as writers we should all strive to do better each and every time we post a RP. Like I have said to everyone in the past make sure your spellcheck your RP's and just proof read them for things missing.

Amber
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#3
04-08-2013, 01:19 PM

Thanks for your comment Amber, i'll do my best to be carefull on this next time =).
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#4
04-08-2013, 01:28 PM

Overall, I was very pleased.
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#5
04-09-2013, 10:44 AM

If Cyren is very pleased, then i'm glad he like it ^^.
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