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This was a terrible RP, amirite?

I know I botched it in several ways at least, but I hope it was at least interesting in some way, and not too depressing!

I am asking because I was just telling Kate how bad it was, and I reread it, and thought..... Hmmmm.... IS it that bad? Or did I just think so.

Pretty sure it's bad, just not as bad as I thought. But, yeah. Overall thoughts and some criticism would be greatly appreciated.

Oh, and Punk: LOOK OUT. I'm RPing harder for Madness!!!!!

How come all the weird kinky stuff in the world reminds you people of me!?

Well since no one responded to this I suppose I will. I honestly do not think it was the worst roleplay I have read, hell not even close. Truthfully you can tell it was a little rushed only because it wasn't up to par with your usual stuff. I honestly think if you would have taken another hour or so to read over it and maybe come up with a little more you wouldn't have had any issues what so ever.

I can't give you any advice because I think you are a strong writer, like I said in my opinion maybe just a little rushed.

Amber

I was going to reply but I got distracted by SSJ's avatar...와우

LOL perv, boys will be boys.

Amber

Haha, a bit of beauty on the boards is never a bad thing

Awe you are making me blush, but you know something I have learned over the years it's not really about looks. I always thought it was, but I love when a person is just themselves and fun. I personally do not think I am anything great, but I appreciate the comments none the less its alway nice to be complimented by your friends.

Amber

Absolutely both are important. Self confidence is key too...and you shouldn't lack it. I know I'm not the only one who's noticed your looks haha. If you can get a bit of confidence from rping, it's all gravy

Hitting on chicks on the internet? A classic that won't ever go away.

I totally have self confidence, but you know I don't believe in being too full of yourself I personally think it's an ugly color. I will admit I dabbled in being a bitch, I was in my opinion an awful person and used alot of people. Luckily I have grown out of that and become a real woman thank god. It's great to have confidence, but there is a fine line between confidence and being cocky. Like I said I'm not the cat's meow in any way shape or form like everyone else I have flaws.

Amber

Confidence and humility, the ultimate combination

Edit - Cyren - it's a shame you can't tell a compliment from flirting. Surprisingly enough I have no plans to emigrate to America.

(04-04-2013, 12:10 PM)Neonero Said: Confidence and humility, the ultimate combination

Edit - Cyren - it's a shame you can't tell a compliment from flirting. Surprisingly enough I have no plans to emigrate to America.

It'd be worth it - giggidy, giggidy - marriage = citizenship!

Lol. My feedback thread gets commented on with stuff to do with sexualness about someone's pic (well, it wasn't meant that way as far as I can tell, until Cyren implied it....Of course....)..... That's no surprise.

But usually, it's about my pics. XD

Mainly with Duke....... I should kill him so he can't "creeper" me if that makes sense.... Which.... It clearly doesn't.

Funny thing is, people keep using that joke, and as Shana I was stalked by Scorpio!!!! XD

....Whatever happened to him, anyway?

How come all the weird kinky stuff in the world reminds you people of me!?

Well I attempted to reply on your rp feedback but the boys took it to the next step. Always thinking with the wrong head.

I'm telling you, if the thread gets too wild it gets derailed.

Pfft, you try and give a compliment and this is what you get.