I am curious if I could get some feedback on my work this week. Please, do not tell me how it was too gross, I am very aware of that consensus. I would appreciate something else, was my story telling weak? Was it my worst work thus far? Was it strong, but not strong enough? Was my trash talk supbar? Things of this nature. I do promise I will not go to that extreme for the content again, or at least I do not plan to. So, perhaps a little assistance?

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=17525

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=17623

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=17620

And the collab

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=17568