Please Login or Register to get full access to the forums.

Lost Password? —
Current time: 08-06-2025, 05:32 AM (time should display as Pacific time zone; please contact Admin if it appears to be wrong)                                                                


X-treme Wrestling Federation » XWF OOC » Out Of Character (OOC) Board
Thread Rating:
  • 0 Vote(s) - 0 Average
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Luke Gunnar Relentless Feedback
Author Message
Luke Gunnar Offline
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP


XWF FanBase:
Teens, some men, few kids
(cheered BECAUSE they break rules and bones)
 (Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Mon Aug 11 2014
Posts: 62
17,918
Likes Given: 6
Likes Received: 39 in 21 posts
Hates Given: 1
Hates Received: 2 in 3 posts
Hates Given: 1
Hates Received: 2 in 3 posts
Reputation: 5
X-Bux: ✘50,000
#1
08-23-2014, 12:01 AM

http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=14384
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=14533
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=14586

This is how my character has been developing thus far. Do any of you guys see room for improvement? Would love to hear.
[Image: HJjQGDo.png]
Edit Hate Post Like Post
LH Harrison Offline
The Inspiration of the XWF


XWF FanBase:
Kids, women, some teens
(fighting the odds; helps others; disliked by adult males)
 XWF Roster Page
Joined: Thu Jul 24 2014
Posts: 251
143,907
Likes Given: 41
Likes Received: 97 in 60 posts
Hates Given: 0
Hates Received: 1 in 2 posts
Hates Given: 0
Hates Received: 1 in 2 posts
Reputation: 13
X-Bux: ✘50,000
#2
08-25-2014, 06:41 AM

Hey man just quickly went through your stuff, and I really enjoyed it. I thought your work was fluid, albeit perhaps a bit short. But I think it kind of works for your character. I'll be interested to see where you go from here.
[Image: yA7XLDP.png]

[Image: f9wsBWb.jpg]
Hate Post Like Post
Luke Gunnar Offline
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP


XWF FanBase:
Teens, some men, few kids
(cheered BECAUSE they break rules and bones)
 (Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Mon Aug 11 2014
Posts: 62
17,918
Likes Given: 6
Likes Received: 39 in 21 posts
Hates Given: 1
Hates Received: 2 in 3 posts
Hates Given: 1
Hates Received: 2 in 3 posts
Reputation: 5
X-Bux: ✘50,000
#3
08-25-2014, 09:42 AM

Thank you man I really appreciate it. I do feel some of the roleplays could have a bit more meat to them, I just didn't want to bog it down with excess filler about what the character did that day/night or what have you.
[Image: HJjQGDo.png]
Hate Post Like Post




Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)