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Feedback possibly? Please :)
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#1
02-16-2014, 02:11 PM

I just wanted peoples feedback on the First of Ally's return match rps.


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02-16-2014, 02:25 PM

I am not sure how much my feedback is worth. But i enjoyed the read; it was well written.

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02-16-2014, 02:27 PM

Thanks Kristy mun (Mun is a code for an rp'ers creator) I really enjoyed reading your stuff too.

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02-16-2014, 02:31 PM

(02-16-2014, 02:27 PM)AlexandraCallaway Said: Thanks Kristy mun (Mun is a code for an rp'ers creator) I really enjoyed reading your stuff too.

Thanks!

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02-16-2014, 02:38 PM

Wow, I think you're a good RPer! Well done. I just started again after years and I've never been that good, so like Kristy I'm not sure how much my feedback is worth. For what it is worth though I think this is a good RP. Smile
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02-16-2014, 02:45 PM

Thank you so much. I can't wait to see some of your work. Welcome back and all. Allys my oldest character. Been using her since 99 so yeah.. I hoped her return after being out for months would be good. Not doing so well as Charlotte Dyson or Damien Callaway..

Any and all words of criticize or praise is welcome. It helps me know what you all are wanting to see.

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02-16-2014, 02:55 PM

If you want you can check out my introductory RP in the News and Character dev section. It's a two parter called "The Age Of Enlightenment". If you could give me a little feedback that would be great.
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02-16-2014, 02:57 PM

I can do that.

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02-16-2014, 03:00 PM

Thanks!
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02-16-2014, 03:03 PM

(02-16-2014, 02:31 PM)Kristy Jackson Said:
(02-16-2014, 02:27 PM)AlexandraCallaway Said: Thanks Kristy mun (Mun is a code for an rp'ers creator) I really enjoyed reading your stuff too.

Thanks!

You are very welcome.

(02-16-2014, 03:00 PM)TrevorLord Said: Thanks!

Trevor Mun.. those rps are amazing. You seem to have a good character arc building. And thank you for using different colors for each person. It helps seeing the difference!!

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02-16-2014, 03:14 PM

Wow...thank you so much! That really means a lot because I am very self critical, lol. Yeah, I'm gonna try to make my RPs as visually appealing as I can. Thanks again. Smile
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02-16-2014, 03:23 PM

(02-16-2014, 03:14 PM)TrevorLord Said: Wow...thank you so much! That really means a lot because I am very self critical, lol. Yeah, I'm gonna try to make my RPs as visually appealing as I can. Thanks again. Smile


You are welcome. I mean.. I'm not the best or anything.. but I understand being self critical.. you are always your own worst critic.

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