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Waylon Offline
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP


XWF FanBase:
Teens, some men, few kids
(cheered BECAUSE they break rules and bones)
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#1
06-06-2014, 05:22 AM

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Ozymandias Offline
Former XWF Management


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#2
06-06-2014, 01:07 PM

He's not kidding, Frodo is seriously your biggest fan.
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Waylon Offline
Registered but either hasn't added self to a roster yet or doesn't RP


XWF FanBase:
Teens, some men, few kids
(cheered BECAUSE they break rules and bones)
 (Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Fri May 02 2014
Posts: 25
7,793
Likes Given: 2
Likes Received: 18 in 14 posts
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#3
06-06-2014, 07:21 PM

I appreciate the feedback. I just sometimes feel like I do not write to this characters full potential I feel the rps could be alot more entertaining.
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Jessie-ica Diaz Offline
Only to find it again.


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#4
06-07-2014, 10:59 PM

Some really good stuff right here, man. I totally dig it.

However, yeah as Frodo said proofreading is your best friend. I know I'm guilty of quite a few fuck ups in that regard, namely in forgetting a word somewhere in a sentence, lol. As for your own doubts on whether or not you're writing this character to its full potential, I'd say develop some narrative to him. Like, what does he do when not wrestling or talking about a wrestling match?

For an idea; imagine what a night on the town would be for Waylon. What's the type of company he keeps? What would he get himself into? Stuff like that. Really explore the character, and find what makes him tick. Then go nuts.
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