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Feedback Por Favor - Gator - 08-19-2014
When I've written one of my RPs I do like them, but when they go up on the site, I read through them again and they look sloppy compared to everyone else's work. Could really use some feedback, so please rip them apart or don't. Whatever.
Uno: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=14397
Dos: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=14433
Tres: http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=14472
Feedback Por Favor - Vincent Lane - 08-19-2014
I don't know what you are seeing as sloppy. You have a style that is distinctly yours, both with the writing and the appearance of the roleplays. I think it works.
Todd might be my favorite character in the fed.
Feedback Por Favor - Gator - 08-19-2014
Thanks man, appreciate it
Also I'm happy to here you like Todd, I wanted him to be the underdog that people root for. I would say Loverboy is Todd's favorite wrestler, but it's Guppy, sorry. Gator likes Loverboy though.
Feedback Por Favor - Vincent Lane - 08-19-2014
Todd should love Guppy, it only makes sense.
Besides, Loverboy is usually more popular with the ladies...
Feedback Por Favor - Great Buzzard Eli James IV - 08-19-2014
I'm enjoying your work. I definitely see growth a little bit here and there with each roleplay.
Feedback Por Favor - Gator - 08-19-2014
Thanks Eli, appreciate it man
Feedback Por Favor - Archie Lawson - 08-19-2014
Hey man, best of luck for our match this week, I dig your work.
Only thing I will say is you should research a bit more when doing trash talk as there's a fair few faults that you've left me to work with. Fuck knows why I am giving my opponent advice!
Feedback Por Favor - Gator - 08-19-2014
I know, being lazy is one of my many flaws. Honestly, I don't have a lot of time for research because of work. But you're right, I'm going to try and rectify my laziness in my next RP. Best of luck in our match and thanks for the advice
RE: Feedback Por Favor - Ozymandias - 08-20-2014
(08-19-2014, 03:39 PM)Archie Lawson Said: Fuck knows why I am giving my opponent advice!
Because you are British and not very bright.