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Feedback please - dannydevia - 03-06-2013
Link to my RP
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=1260
So anyway looking for some feedback on this. Anything to make it better, did it flow or not. Was it too long? anything to tell me to make my next one a bit better.