Cain
The Last Son of Eden
XWF FanBase: Teens, some men, few kids (cheered BECAUSE they break rules and bones)
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Joined: Wed Mar 19 2014
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12-10-2015, 09:22 PM
Wondering how I'm doing. Got two up for Back in Black. Starting out slow and fleshing out Cain into what he was always meant to be.
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Frodo mother fucking Smackins
Big Dick Playa
XWF FanBase: Drug addicts, rebels, weirdos (the villain you love to hate; has cult following; may deal drugs on side)
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Joined: Mon Dec 23 2013
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12-11-2015, 01:35 AM
It was ok, there was one coding issue at the end, but it was ok. Not really sure why Cain is playing with Zombies. I feel like you're getting back closer to where you were before. I would work on setting more story, explaining why Cain tastes Orangutan shit, explain why he is killing people, and why he is so angry at Prince. And do more than tell us Cain is big and bad. Show us. Show us how much shit Cain can fuck up, don't just have Cain tell us he can do it.
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Cyren
XWF Legend
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(Where is my roster page?)
Joined: Thu Dec 03 2015
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12-12-2015, 11:37 AM
It's solid and I've enjoyed what you've written.
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