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How's my latest works? - Cain - 12-10-2015
Wondering how I'm doing. Got two up for Back in Black. Starting out slow and fleshing out Cain into what he was always meant to be.
RE: How's my latest works? - Frodo mother fucking Smackins - 12-11-2015
It was ok, there was one coding issue at the end, but it was ok. Not really sure why Cain is playing with Zombies. I feel like you're getting back closer to where you were before. I would work on setting more story, explaining why Cain tastes Orangutan shit, explain why he is killing people, and why he is so angry at Prince. And do more than tell us Cain is big and bad. Show us. Show us how much shit Cain can fuck up, don't just have Cain tell us he can do it.
RE: How's my latest works? - Cyren - 12-12-2015
It's solid and I've enjoyed what you've written.