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Vincent Lane
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03-26-2015, 06:23 PM
I agree with JB, and I'd also add in that it's a good idea to have a certain series of events worked out in your head so you know to go from point A to B to C.
That's REALLY tough in a RP environment, and isn't always necessary, but it definitely helps when you can think of each roleplay as a sort of chapter in a series.
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03-26-2015, 06:58 PM
Not sure what you mean Vinnie in relation to this RP, because in the post before it my character was in that barn. But I appreciate the advice fellas
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Karl_Cross
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03-27-2015, 03:28 PM
Best role play of the week as far as I'm concerned. My view is that content is more important than structure. What John means is that there is a line break missing between dialogue and narrative in a few points but that doesn't (in my few) take away from how well written it was. Not saying that John was suggesting this is a huge problem but his feedback in terms of stricture is correct; just watch your formatting tags.
Interesting scene, good dialogue and furthered the match story. From your opponent I was happy enough.
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03-27-2015, 03:44 PM
Noted. Thanks Karl.. have enjoyed working with you this week.
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Karl_Cross
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03-27-2015, 03:47 PM
Likewise. Hope to work with you again some time.
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