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Feedback on last 2 RP's
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Steve "KingSlayer" Davids Offline
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05-27-2013, 02:50 AM

As you say, I think you just need to keep it up. Your character development will keep coming and allow you to write more detailed descriptions and dialogue...The work is evidently of a good quality and I look forward to what's to come...
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Feedback on last 2 RP's - by Bane Williams - 05-27-2013, 02:16 AM
Feedback on last 2 RP's - by Steve "KingSlayer" Davids - 05-27-2013, 02:50 AM
Feedback on last 2 RP's - by Jack Killborn - 05-27-2013, 02:54 AM



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