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#1
04-10-2020, 02:34 AM

atara is at a subway station, waiting for a train to pull in..... she hears people muttering a little bit off screen.... she gazes off to see what all the commotion is about, and as the camera pans over, she finds herself looking at a couple of homeless people fighting over a bug-infested corndog. atara scoffs, as the train pulls into the station. the door opens and--WHACK!!! red-x hops out of the train with a baseball bat shot to the cranium!! atara drops, before x lifts her up..... X MARX DA SPOT!!!!!~!

spike ddt connects, and x goes for the cover.... oddly enough, one of the homeless people pulls their nasty, dirty shirt off to reveal a nasty, dirty ref's shirt. he goes to make the count;


1..................2.................??
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#2
04-10-2020, 03:53 AM

....kickout.

I swear I'll give a proper kick out at some point.
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#3
04-10-2020, 04:29 AM

Lesson 1: Don’t bother with “proper” kickouts. Length and descriptions don’t matter. Toss a GIF and a Kickout
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04-10-2020, 04:37 AM

i like descriptive kickouts, cuz that's what i did as champ back when i wasn't under a mask.... but it's not mandatory, don't worry
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'I don't know,' she said, tucking the covers around me, 'I guess He just got tired of all the bullshit'
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#5
04-10-2020, 05:13 AM

I will say, it is disappointing to people, especially the person who wrote the pin attempt, when they just get "kickout."

Understandable sometimes, maybe you don't have time, etc. But I at least like to see the creativity/effort matched by the kickout that came with the pin. We've discussed making that a rule of sorts but I also don't want to make it so only the "better" writers can swoop in and take the belt whenever they want. The 12 hour time window is the heart of the attempt, and should be.

Also, Red-X, this was your third attempt in a row. Don't do that.
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#6
04-10-2020, 06:33 AM

Disregard because my reading retention sucks.
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#7
04-10-2020, 06:40 AM

Oh nvm, yeah. Don't make it a judging thing.

50 to a hundred word kickout minimum.
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#8
04-10-2020, 07:24 AM

(04-10-2020, 05:13 AM)"Loverboy" Vinnie Lane Said: Also, Red-X, this was your third attempt in a row. Don't do that.

the first one was discounted due to my responding to fuzz.... i thought that meant that it didn't count toward the limit, sorry, i'll remember this next time. >.<
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'I don't know,' she said, tucking the covers around me, 'I guess He just got tired of all the bullshit'
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