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Hit me with some feedback - Rebel - 07-30-2013
http://xwf99.com/showthread.php?tid=5020
Latest piece- see what ya think
Hit me with some feedback - #MemeQueen Luca Torchwick - 07-30-2013
One correction I have to make right now. I know you mean the King of XWF title, but referring to it as a World Title isn't entirely accurate. At least the way I see things, The Euro, US, and TV titles are World titles, and the King is one step above that. Then again, I could be wrong about that.
While I like the piece in and of itself a LOT, it comes across as more of a New/Rumors or Challenge in the Looking for a Fight board, rather than an RP. Then again, although it does seem out of place, it appears a lot more legitimate (if that word fits, I can't describe it that well) than most of the Challenges, and for that it also fits as an RP. Wow, that came across as confusing and contradictory, moving forward.
All in all, more of the good work you showed in the tourney.
(P.S. I love the bringing up of both Jessie and Luca in two somewhat different lights, considering that I handle both characters. Then again, I think no one else would find as much enjoyment out of that as I do.)
Hit me with some feedback - Rebel - 07-30-2013
Lol, I didn't know you handled Jessie. I'll try to remember the title naming. And I wanted it to come across as a role play for Monday Night Madness, not really a challenge. In character, I wasn't really challenging you, but feeding off of Heyman's dislike for you to get the match. If you understand what I mean.