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Feedback wanted! I would like feedback on Anarchy promo
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Mr. Oz Offline
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#1
06-13-2021, 07:33 PM


I think it's on par with my other ones, but I've noticed in my past that when I do very well, I'll find a way to fuck up and start my descent into shite.

Let me know what I could've done better. I don't want to start going into old habits, y'know?

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#2
06-13-2021, 08:51 PM

I envy your match focus. I usually find myself losing focus and just rambling. You dont do that. You are always focused.

I think you have hit a major stride. I feel like you have a great character at this point. One of my faves
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#3
06-14-2021, 06:40 AM

It's good, and I like the direction that your taking Oswald. He's becoming a much bigger deal than anyone would have given him credit for even three months ago. So far there is no decent into shite. lol. Just keep writing what YOU want to write and what makes YOU happy. So long as it makes sense (and sometimes even if it doesn't) you'll be fine! lol

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#4
06-14-2021, 04:35 PM

Very well written Ozzy. Nothing about it was boring. It was relevant and I can feel the build in the character. Keep going. Youve been doing GREAT work lately.

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#5
06-14-2021, 07:20 PM

Seriously, thank you guys. I'm hoping I don't drop off. I wanna keep this thing going. I'm just keeping it in my mind about my old behaviors, y'know? Don't wanna fall down after this run.

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