Well right there you are asking for trouble. "The best role-player around" will either show who is self centered and stuck up their own ass or a lot of people who are taking the piss.

If you want feedback you just need to ask.

If you want to know where you fucked up (which in itself sounds like you are doubting the validity of the loss).

In any case....I am not the best role-player around but if you link the role-plays here I will look at them and PM you feedback. I will be brutally honest so before you ask for feedback you need to think about if you actually want real, honest feedback AND if you can handle it. I will not insult you but I will tell you if I see any issues that could/will hurt you.