OOC: Hey guys, not really sure if I'm posting this in the right place but I guess it falls under character development. I haven't been in a fed for a couple of years so I'm no doubt a little rusty, I also hate debuts because you have very little material to work with. Any feedback, positive or negative, is welcomed and will be taken on board. Also, I always type my stuff up on Dreamweaver then just upload it as its easier for me, hence the link. Anyway, enjoy!

http://ewfederation.angelfire.com/sane1.html

That link doesn't even work for me, so you'll probably have to at least start copypasting.

There is a thread for feedback, and an OOC convo thread as well. You character bio seems cool though!

Thanks man, I should have checked the link myself, my bad. All sorted now. Cheers.

That works now, definitely looks pretty cool - I'm honestly nnot sure if you'd be allowed to link the RPs or if you'd have to post them here. Probably the latter'd be my guess.

Also, that super light grey is really hard to read. Maybe that's just me though.

Good luck!

Ah okay, I wasn't sure how things worked here in regards to that, I'll get clarification. Thanks man.