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Need that fap back.... I mean feedback!!! - Ezekiel Carter-Williams V - 01-07-2014
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On this piece.
Likes, dislikes?
Irony had me thinking that Ezekiel is similar to Luca in Alot of ways so I decided to change things up by adding a plot twist to Ezekiel's story.
Good idea or bad idea
Honest opinions here
Need that fap back.... I mean feedback!!! - Ezekiel Carter-Williams V - 01-08-2014
Anyone....no one? Aww
Need that fap back.... I mean feedback!!! - Morbid Angel - 01-09-2014
Here’s what I was seeing. When the HIV came in that was funny as shit! And when the blood dripping part I was thinking lesion because of the disease…who the fuck stays with a bitch that gives them HIV?….well, what am I saying…I stayed with someone who pointed a gun at me and also tried to hit me with a brick…HIV is much more painless lol.
I can’t understand the infatuation with the undead here and I am not trying to be a jerk by saying that half the roster is possessed with demons or some type of deity. Though it was well written and I enjoyed it...I loved the drug addicted wrestler idea with the Meth (even though the other half is on drugs lol) Meth is one of those things that catches you and you don’t expect it in a wrestler.
If I could make a suggestion. The Meth portion worked. Don’t fall into the entire demonic plague idea because its been done 20 times over. I like the idea! I really do! You have a strong character with a solid idea. Has a bad past and a drug problem. Don’t compile if you don’t need to! Perhaps it be all a drug induced delusion from the bad quality meth! And again I am not trying to be an ass.
I know HIV isn’t suppose to make people laugh but I do…shit one time I went to a bar and got drunk and woke up with HIV…shits still funny! Lol (Also know I have had a few drinks before writing this… I try and always be honest. DOS EQUIS!)