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Any Feedback? - Smoke - 12-30-2013
Would anyone mind giving a little feedback for my last few RPs? Would be greatly appreciated!
Part 1
Part 2
Finale
Thanks in advance.
Any Feedback? - Smoke - 12-30-2013
...Anybody?
Any Feedback? - John Msdison 2.Faggot - 12-30-2013
I checked out parts 1 and 2 and I thought you did good. No mistakes really jump out at me. I liked how you referenced the history in your second part, that's always good to see in trash talk. It adds more force behind the punch than people think.